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Published on Oct 4, 2023

Writing Emails that Make People Want to Buy | Privy

Lauren Hall

Written by Lauren Hall

Over the years, Ryan Lee has created a handful of ecommerce businesses that have generated seven figures a month in revenue.

In that time, he has absolutely mastered email.

While most brands focus entirely on the product, Ryan’s main goal is to make business more personal by building a connection that goes way beyond just the product.
I mean, just look at his latest email…

Not your average email from a brand, right?

So we asked for email submissions and Ryan gave some really actionable feedback any brand can use to make more money with email.

On this episode, you’ll learn:

  • The shift you have to make to get better at copywriting.
  • The power of getting personal with your messaging
  • Why you need to think of yourself as a superhero when you’re writing emails.
  • How to double your email revenue.

What to listen for:

  • [3:59] What makes a good email?
  • [6:05] Email #1 feedback.
  • [8:01] Why you need to be careful about the number of CTAs in your emails.
  • [11:07] Why you shouldn’t be using generic photos.
  • [15:24] Email #2 feedback.
  • [18:57] How to send emails that make sense to both your superfans and newer folks.
  • [28:55] Email #3 feedback.
  • [29:40] The benefits of using short, choppy copy.
  • [34:41] Email #4 feedback.
  • [37:23] Email #5 feedback.
  • [40:35] Email #6 feedback.
  • [43:34] How to pique people’s interest with a subject line.
  • [45:16] How to sell a nonessential item in the middle of a pandemic.
  • [47:03] How to write an email for your new subscribers.
  • [48:49] How often Ryan sends emails to his customers.

Writen by Lauren Hall

Lauren Hall

Lauren is a Brand Marketing Associate at Privy. She's the brains behind all things content. When she's offline, she's obsessing over her Bernedoodle pup, Monster, and plotting ways to being a full-time Vermonter ASAP.

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